Wednesday, November 14, 2007


This week's words are:


My contribution to 3WW is...

icy tracks
caused the train
to pause

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Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

I can see that!

9:02 AM  
Blogger Sandy said...

Good, GT...I'm glad


9:03 AM  
Anonymous Rose Dewy Knickers said...

Gives an intelligence to the train.



9:30 AM  
Anonymous pia said...

love how sparsely you used the words to tell a story

10:07 AM  
Blogger Sandy said...

Rose...Ice on the tracks would make me pause.

Pia...that is the great thing about haiku, you can say quite a bit with an economy of words.

Thank you both for stopping by.


10:47 AM  
Anonymous UL said...

Nice word play here, wonderful!

12:08 PM  
Blogger paisley said...

i see you were grabbed right away too.. so was i....

12:15 PM  
Blogger tumblewords said...

Wise train! Nice ku and imagery!

1:36 PM  
Blogger Sandy said...

Hi tumblewords... thank you, I'm glad you like my wise train.


1:55 PM  
Blogger Shephard said...

It takes a smart train to know when to pause. ;)

2:21 PM  
Blogger TC said...

Very straight to the point!

2:40 PM  
Blogger Sandy said...

Yes, Shephard it certainly does. :)

TC, with these words it was very easy to get straight to the point.



5:02 PM  
Anonymous catnapping said...

very nice. i like the minimalism here. perfect.

5:37 PM  
Blogger Truefaith1963 said...

Concise picture painted - clever poetic form!

11:29 PM  
Blogger Sandy said...

I appreciate it, Truefaith1963...thank you for visiting.


5:31 AM  
Blogger Fledgling Poet said...

So few words, but very visual! Thanks for sharing.

3:36 PM  
Blogger Sandy said...

You are more than welcome, FP...thank you.


4:38 PM  
Blogger Sandy said...

Thank you, Cat and I wonder who encouraged me to start writing this style...hum?


4:40 PM  
Blogger Bone said...

I can almost hear it screeching to a halt.

7:35 AM  
Blogger Sandy said...

Bone...That is exactly what I try to evoke with my can see it, hear it, feel it.

Thanks for stopping by.


7:47 AM  
Blogger  said...

Simple perfection. So very nice to read.

10:21 AM  
Blogger Michelle Johnson said...

Hope the delay wasn't to long and everyone made it to their destination safely. Nice job. Keep up the good work.

Have a nice night.

2:16 PM  

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