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posted by Sandy at 8:46 AM
Wednesday, November 14, 2007
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22 Comments:
I can see that!
Good, GT...I'm glad
S
Gives an intelligence to the train.
Rose
xo
love how sparsely you used the words to tell a story
Rose...Ice on the tracks would make me pause.
Pia...that is the great thing about haiku, you can say quite a bit with an economy of words.
Thank you both for stopping by.
S
Nice word play here, wonderful!
i see you were grabbed right away too.. so was i....
Wise train! Nice ku and imagery!
Hi tumblewords... thank you, I'm glad you like my wise train.
S
It takes a smart train to know when to pause. ;)
~S
Very straight to the point!
Yes, Shephard it certainly does. :)
TC, with these words it was very easy to get straight to the point.
Regards,
S
very nice. i like the minimalism here. perfect.
Concise picture painted - clever poetic form!
I appreciate it, Truefaith1963...thank you for visiting.
S
So few words, but very visual! Thanks for sharing.
You are more than welcome, FP...thank you.
S
Thank you, Cat and I wonder who encouraged me to start writing this style...hum?
S
I can almost hear it screeching to a halt.
Bone...That is exactly what I try to evoke with my words...you can see it, hear it, feel it.
Thanks for stopping by.
S
Simple perfection. So very nice to read.
Hope the delay wasn't to long and everyone made it to their destination safely. Nice job. Keep up the good work.
Have a nice night.
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