Saturday, November 24, 2007

Adventure

Word prompt from One Deep Breath

Adventure

ice axe
scars the side
of a mountain

8 Comments:

Anonymous catnapping said...

omg. this is the one. this is excellent.

this is not mock haiku. this is real haiku. and one of you very best.

12:14 PM  
Blogger Sandy said...

Alright, I have to post it on Heavenly Haiku then. LOL

I'm glad you like it.

S

1:10 PM  
Blogger qualcosa di bello said...

now, to climb the side of an snowy, icy mountain would be an unbelievable adventure. your words are lovely to turn over in the mind.

5:59 AM  
Blogger Sandy said...

qualcosa di bello, your words are very lovely to read...thank you.

Sandy

8:10 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

oh gosh this sets up a story doesn't it? Excellent.

12:56 PM  
Blogger Sandy said...

heh heh Crafty Green Poet..thank you!

S

12:59 PM  
Blogger Michelle Johnson said...

Beautiful. But, I think my feet would get to cold trying this adventure. Thank you for sharing such a nice haiku. Keep up the good work.

6:14 AM  
Anonymous quietpaths said...

This piece is very intriguing!

9:01 AM  

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