Tuesday, January 15, 2008

Treasure

Prompt from Writer's Island: Treasure

My haiku...

at the beach
a grubby little hand
proudly holds a treasure

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8 Comments:

Blogger jadey said...

Hey there Sandy I like this haiku alot and why is that? Well cause it lets me picture my kids on the beach digging in the sand and coming up with a special something a treasure to them thanks for the happy thoughts as well as the great piece.

1:51 PM  
Blogger Linda said...

This creates such a vivid image! Great haiku writing!

1:54 PM  
Blogger Tammy said...

I can see those grubby little hands. Wonderful imagery Sandy.

3:00 PM  
Blogger keith hillman said...

11 words that speak volumes. Nice.

3:19 PM  
Blogger tumblewords said...

A most visual treasure haiku! Wonderful!

3:51 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

very vivid...

1:53 AM  
Blogger Carole said...

This is so tangible . . . a thing to be treasured indeed.

7:42 AM  
Blogger Sandy said...

I'd like to thank all of you for your kind words.

S

10:59 AM  

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