Treasure
Prompt from Writer's Island: Treasure
My haiku...
at the beach
a grubby little hand
proudly holds a treasure
My haiku...
at the beach
a grubby little hand
proudly holds a treasure
Labels: Haiku, Writer's Island
posted by Sandy at 12:20 PM
8 Comments:
Hey there Sandy I like this haiku alot and why is that? Well cause it lets me picture my kids on the beach digging in the sand and coming up with a special something a treasure to them thanks for the happy thoughts as well as the great piece.
This creates such a vivid image! Great haiku writing!
I can see those grubby little hands. Wonderful imagery Sandy.
11 words that speak volumes. Nice.
A most visual treasure haiku! Wonderful!
very vivid...
This is so tangible . . . a thing to be treasured indeed.
I'd like to thank all of you for your kind words.
S
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