Tuesday, January 01, 2008


Prompt for One Deep Breath is frost.

hoarfrost ferns
a mud puddle



Blogger Roswila said...

Back many years ago when I was very active in the New York city poetry community, we used to call poems like yours "haikuesques.":-)

I really like it, by the way. It has a very haiku-like feel due to that contrast between mud and the beauty of frost.

8:43 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

lovely imagery

1:12 AM  
Blogger qualcosa di bello said...

frosty perfection!!!! i love it :)

happy new year!

6:34 AM  
Blogger Sandy Carlson said...

That's really wonderful. The thought of decorating a mud puddle has my heart leaping. I love it.
Writing in Faith

12:41 PM  
Blogger spacedlaw said...

They do, absolutely!

1:37 PM  
Blogger tumblewords said...

The contrast is very vivid! Nice!

7:15 PM  
Blogger Krissie said...

so beautiful, and I could see the picture in my mind right away!

2:43 AM  
Blogger lissa said...

simple and to the point. I do like the idea of doing haiku in the none-traditional way. Nicely done.

9:12 AM  

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