One Deep Breath...Word Prompt
Word prompt for One Deep breath is container.
My haiku contribution...
wishes
wrapped up in
brightly colored boxes
and another one...
seed of man
fertilized in
a human vessel
My haiku contribution...
wishes
wrapped up in
brightly colored boxes
and another one...
seed of man
fertilized in
a human vessel
posted by Sandy at 6:33 AM
13 Comments:
love them both..oh you clever people out there!!!!
These are nice. One makes me think of the joy of Christmas and the other, of my daughter.
God bless. Thanks.
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http://slcpoems.blogspot.com
that second one was really good... i loved it....
great haiku! the first one is awesome!
The first one is right for the season. And I knew somebody would seize upon the interpretation in the second one.
i particularly like the first one. plenty of room to see and fill with one's own interpretation.
Ah, very nice! Wishes wrapped - a nice thought.
So much expressed, so simply.
the first is nice, but the second is spledid!
I thank all of you for your very kind words and I appreciate you visiting my blogs.
Sandy
those two are beautifully written, thank you...from wishes to man...
what contrasting takes...both so excellent! the first one makes me think of the season & the second is just so beautiful & so pristine.
i like the changes you made to the first one. it's perfect.
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