Sunday, December 02, 2007

One Deep Breath...Word Prompt

Word prompt for One Deep breath is container.

My haiku contribution...

wishes
wrapped up in
brightly colored boxes

and another one...

seed of man
fertilized in
a human vessel

13 Comments:

Blogger Krissie said...

love them both..oh you clever people out there!!!!

6:31 PM  
Blogger Sandy Carlson said...

These are nice. One makes me think of the joy of Christmas and the other, of my daughter.

God bless. Thanks.

Mine's up at

http://slcpoems.blogspot.com

8:26 PM  
Blogger paisley said...

that second one was really good... i loved it....

8:39 PM  
Blogger Greggo said...

great haiku! the first one is awesome!

8:40 PM  
Blogger spacedlaw said...

The first one is right for the season. And I knew somebody would seize upon the interpretation in the second one.

2:23 AM  
Blogger susan said...

i particularly like the first one. plenty of room to see and fill with one's own interpretation.

5:59 AM  
Blogger tumblewords said...

Ah, very nice! Wishes wrapped - a nice thought.

10:11 AM  
Blogger get zapped said...

So much expressed, so simply.

10:49 AM  
Blogger Tiffany said...

the first is nice, but the second is spledid!

7:12 AM  
Blogger Sandy said...

I thank all of you for your very kind words and I appreciate you visiting my blogs.

Sandy

8:10 AM  
Blogger LittleWing said...

those two are beautifully written, thank you...from wishes to man...

3:40 PM  
Blogger qualcosa di bello said...

what contrasting takes...both so excellent! the first one makes me think of the season & the second is just so beautiful & so pristine.

8:34 AM  
Blogger Catnapping said...

i like the changes you made to the first one. it's perfect.

3:54 PM  

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