Wednesday, January 23, 2008

3WW





Prompt for 3WW is...

Breath
Scattered
Tomorrow

My senryu is...

a warm breath
causes scattered thoughts
postponing tomorrow

14 Comments:

Blogger pjd said...

Very nice sentiment underlying this. A complete story in very few words. Nicely done.

8:25 AM  
Blogger TC said...

It's nice to postpone tomorrow sometimes, isn't it? :)

8:27 AM  
Blogger paisley said...

you and susan... y'all are making me jealous!!!! very nicely done...

8:53 AM  
Anonymous pia said...

If only tomorrow could be postponed sometimes

9:08 AM  
Blogger TrĂ©e said...

Oooooh, maybe I'm reading more into this one than is there. :-D

10:09 AM  
Blogger susan said...

We began with same premise and then our thoughts diverged.

10:45 AM  
Blogger tumblewords said...

Oh, nice. Nice!

12:07 PM  
Blogger Sandy said...

PJD, thank you as always.

TC, it most certainly is.

Paisley, I can assure you, YOU have nothing to be jealous of. ;) Thx!

Pia, yes, if only.

Tree, no, you aren't. he he

Susan, I cannot wait to read what you did with the prompt.

TW, thank you so much, you sweet woman.

S

12:22 PM  
Blogger LittleWing said...

beautiful..

2:59 PM  
Blogger Tammy said...

Very sensual senryu Sandy. :)

4:29 PM  
Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

i postponed..err..finished tomorrow in my post..

great senryu..

if tomorrow comes

1:37 AM  
Anonymous Corina said...

Excellent! I enjoyed this.

2:46 AM  
Anonymous UL said...

senryu, thar's interesting...i loved this one, that talks of postponing tomorrows..thank you.

7:35 AM  
Anonymous Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

I don't mind postponing tomorrow that way.

Great job getting it across so simply.

8:09 AM  

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