Thursday, January 24, 2008

One Deep Breath

Prompt for ODB...vision

My senryu...

blind seer
has a disturbing vision
predicts disaster

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8 Comments:

Blogger paisley said...

a blessing or a curse??? excellently done....

7:30 AM  
Blogger Quiet Paths said...

Ooh, interesting take on this! Well done...

7:42 AM  
Blogger tumblewords said...

Much to read in those three lines. Nice!

8:00 AM  
Blogger Sandy Carlson said...

This makes me think of blind prophets. The vision turns inward with frightening accuracy...

This is a wonderful piece.

Writing in Faith: Poems

10:05 AM  
Blogger qualcosa di bello said...

few words packing a huge punch!!

5:06 PM  
Blogger Roswila said...

You capture the true seers blessing/curse. And that contrast between blindness and "second sight" also raises questions. Intriguing 'ku.

8:36 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

there's a story behind that one, excellent

12:11 AM  
Anonymous UL said...

I will have to look up how these senryus are made...or its rules. i love them.

7:37 AM  

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