Not exactly haiku, but haiku-like
Labels: ODB, Senryu
posted by Sandy at 6:59 AM
a blessing or a curse??? excellently done....
Ooh, interesting take on this! Well done...
Much to read in those three lines. Nice!
This makes me think of blind prophets. The vision turns inward with frightening accuracy...This is a wonderful piece.Writing in Faith: Poems
few words packing a huge punch!!
You capture the true seers blessing/curse. And that contrast between blindness and "second sight" also raises questions. Intriguing 'ku.
there's a story behind that one, excellent
I will have to look up how these senryus are made...or its rules. i love them.
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