Not exactly haiku, but haiku-like
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posted by Sandy at 6:44 AM
lovelyI like how it changes sense as one wonders who is doing the moaning and for why.I like the multi-layers within this.
Oh, my kitty moans but she only wants to eat. She considers the walk to the bed the exercise. lol Enjoyed this.
please ms. sandy to write a new haiku. please. please. please. please. please.[pretend i have typed this a thousand times, and then write me some haiku!]the snow is practically all melted here. i wore a shirt outside today..it's bloody warm out. the high was 43, i think. chicago stole our weather.
This is my life, everyday, before I walk my dogs.
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I like how it changes sense as one wonders who is doing the moaning and for why.
I like the multi-layers within this.
Oh, my kitty moans but she only wants to eat. She considers the walk to the bed the exercise. lol Enjoyed this.
please ms. sandy to write a new haiku. please. please. please. please. please.
[pretend i have typed this a thousand times, and then write me some haiku!]
the snow is practically all melted here. i wore a shirt outside today..it's bloody warm out. the high was 43, i think. chicago stole our weather.
This is my life, everyday, before I walk my dogs.
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